Ana, you have some grammar mistakes. Instead of feel that means "caer" you have to put fell that means "sentir". Then instead of "a good friends" you must put "some good friends" because is plural. A part from that, the message that you want to transmit us it´s good. In additon; I will put a title to make the story works in a better way.
Ana, you have some grammar mistakes. Instead of feel that means "caer" you have to put fell that means "sentir". Then instead of "a good friends" you must put "some good friends" because is plural.
ReplyDeleteA part from that, the message that you want to transmit us it´s good.
In additon; I will put a title to make the story works in a better way.